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School C
Respond to the following questions in a three to five page typed narrative; add any additional information that may be helpful.
•              What are your reasons for applying to the C School of Social Work?
•              Discuss your personal values, philosophy, knowledge of social issues, and the professional and community experiences that have influenced your decision to enter the professions.
•              Comment on your skills, strengths and weaknesses.
•              Describe your reasons for choosing a particular focus in the field of social work.
•              Discuss your plans for a career in social work

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           My reason to applying to “C school” is continue my graduate education and complete Master program in social work. Since I was about thirteen, there was something about helping others that made me feel awarded inside. As a teenager you don’t know what appreciation is until you grow up. Knowing your making a change and that I mean a positive change is a feeling that’s hard to explain to others. I like to encourage others, and guide them, and also self promote them to be better. Attending “C school” will help me understand and benefit me for my professional endeavors.
        My personal values that have influenced me to..
You can use this for social issues :
       Homelessness is one of the social issues affecting the society today and one, which is very important to me. Most of the times, I encounter clients who are homeless or at the risk of becoming homeless. Some are people who other people at one point in their life have brought them to the situation of becoming homeless and they don’t know what to do and think that this is the end for them. I’ve had a situation were a client was living in a hotel with his family because the client was evicted from his house. It was a very hard time for the client because it led to depression and them not being able to provide for their family. Having a short time professional experience has brought to my attention what they need is encouragement that life goes on and that it is not a long-term situation, a voice to air their problem and someone who they can go to for problem solving.

Add all skills from previous essay: in different wording

Reasons; as previous, making a difference, helping those in need

Career choice: Plan to work with all ages for more experience, and than work in a clinical setting with cancer patients.

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